The comments that I have received are very valuable and specific comments. It states that I should have included 3 ideas minimum instead of only 2 ideas. I should also have written more detailed pros and cons and descriptions of my ideas instead of short sentences. However, I do not agree with the comment about the structure of my blog and the grammar/punctuation. I think the grammar and punctuation is structured OK. Maybe the comment is right about using descriptive details to describe the materials/steps I could have used instead to make sure my project would have ended the way I planned it to. In my plan/create/design I could have included pictures of all the different steps I went through to get to this result. If I would have made a video then my blog/presentation would have looked more interesting. However, a positive thing about my blog would be that I did include pictures to show my materials and last few steps of the project.
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